"That sounds good," Mokuba said as he read over the paper, "but instead of 'make you feel really sick to yourself stomach,' can that be changed to, 'solanine that can cause nausea?' Because that's more to the point in less words. Plus, be more specific about the mess up your head bit? Everything else sounds good." He made sure to smile at Todd and let him know everything was said with only the best interest of their grade in mind. He wasn't trying to be critical, and he certainly hope it didn't come off that way.
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Date: 2006-03-01 04:28 am (UTC)